Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, August 6, 2021
how to make a terrific blog comment
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Devi,
ReplyDeleteYour video was very engaging. I liked your use of engaging images and clear text. It was super helpful for someone like me who is new to leaving comments on blogs. Next time, I would suggest that the background music is quieter as it was difficult to hear you. Well done Devi.
Ms Lap
Bonjour MS Lap
DeleteThank you for comment I'm really glad I helped you with your commenting. I agree that the background noise was a bit too loud but it was quite tricky so I stuck with the original video.
-Devi